The language is fractured but, I think, not meaningless. How is a person to know the grandiose and darting mind of God in the midst of dishtowels and pieces of laundry fuzzing out of each other? What is the great throbbing beating? I don't know, but the whole thing says domestic life in a new way.
I awake possessed by God
and annex the darting mind
to replace it and make it know
flung up in a dishtowel
with a sweater fuzzing out of my skirt
But what should I obey or own
if I swallow my sense and my sword
in a great throbbing beating in my face?
Hello, hello, hello....
We look at poems that work and consider what's doing the lifting. Formal, experimental, lyric, narrative. Mostly contemporary. The length, brief. Scroll down. ⬇⬇⬇
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Kissing My Future by Allyson Young
I like the frivolity of this one. The long blank spaces suggest a youthful, breathless excitement over love. This poem was included in an is...
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From the 20th c., here's a mysterious thing. What is the writer thinking? Is it just that the name Galileo and his awakening, changing, ...
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What causes so much energy in this poem? It is lithe and sinewy in sound and image. The repetitive "was," "was," "w...
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A favorite from what I've read of Pablo Neruda's 225 odes. His best are a little far out, like this one. I like the idea of the dict...
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